i think itd be better to watch if it wasnt an animatic
i think itd be better to watch if it wasnt an animatic
there is a lot you have to do, i like the fact that you made it about abraham's assassination in minecraft thats pretty clever. but all i can say is more frames! if you make a lot more inbetweiners itll look more smooth and i cant really tell whether or not your animating in 24 fps but thats another one. another pointer is you shouldnt just animate on part of the object especially the john wilkes steve heaving for air. it make it look much nicer and fluid. Itll take a hell of a lot more time but its WELL worth it my friend! and look for voice actors most are looking for jobs in the collabinate (:
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if you did another one of these in the future id be pretty pleased lol
my plan is to make 3 or 4 animations a month
very random lol, i know its just a test and it seems to be your first animation posted, but adding extra frames always helps. if you look at my first one that was literally my first and i did it sloppily bc i just wanted it out there didn't spend much time on inbetweens and had no clue what i was doing lol. other than that the sound to me sounds clear and beyond that i think when your animation evolves it'll look good, you got this!
that was really good 5/5 :)
Why do you only have two videos here? :o
So weird lol this is pretty good, its very clean and niceand the sound is good too, id like to see what you could do if you made a whole animation.
Im so glad im not on anything xD
Lol that was good, i enjoyed it. good stuff keep it up c:
Its alright but the fact that it started to loop was terrible, just google how to use script functions and buttons on flash or something so this doesnt happen again.
I know how to, but I forgot to add it in aha
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